Narration Example
Instructions:
1. Write your thesis.
2. Answer questions 1, 2 and 3.
3. Write your Narration.
My persuasive argument thesis is: To make citizen quit smoking, it is better to design tobacco package with warning labels of smoking than increasing its price.
1. Write your thesis.
2. Answer questions 1, 2 and 3.
3. Write your Narration.
My persuasive argument thesis is: To make citizen quit smoking, it is better to design tobacco package with warning labels of smoking than increasing its price.
1. What do people already know about my topic?
Most of Koreans know that Korean government enacted law about increasing tobacco price. Some Koreans know that there are some countries which implement policy of warning labels on cigarette package. Everyone knows smoking is harmful. Every smokers knows the bad influences of cigar, but they cannot quit. Korean smokers can easily see the polished tobacco packages.
2. What research has already been done about my topic?
http://cdrwww.who.int/fctc/guidelines/ArtElevenHammondOne.pdf
warning labels on tobacco package (not with provocative images just prose)
http://www.tobaccofreekids.org/research/factsheets/pdf/0325.pdf
countries which implement this policy
To make people quit smoke by considering classical conditioning.
warning labels on tobacco package (not with provocative images just prose)
http://www.tobaccofreekids.org/research/factsheets/pdf/0325.pdf
countries which implement this policy
3. What are the implications of my argument (What if I'm right? What if I'm right and people ignore me?)
To make citizen quit smoking, it is better to design tobacco package with warning labels of smoking than increasing its price. If people ignore me, they cannot know the real example of harmful effect of smoking, just know that fact: smoking is bad. Directly watching bad image can make people consider smoking again.
My Narration
'Smoking is not good for health'. Almost every people around the world know this fact. In reality, there are 4700 kinds of pernicious ingredients like carbon monoxide, nicotine, cyanide and ammonia and they work as causing cancer or promoting factor. Also, they result in not only cancer but COLD and a respiratory disease. For this reasons, it is advised to stop smoking world widely then most of countries have implemented various endeavors to make their nation quit smoking. Increasing tobacco price, warning labels on its package and anti-smoking education at schools or companies are those examples. In Korea, the government have carried out education to lower smoking rate. However, according to OECD, the smoking rate of Korea points 21.6%, which ranks 14 among 34 countries. It is almost similar with the average smoking rate (20.7%)of OECD countries. This means that Korea still needs some more policies to drop the smoking rate.
In this stream, recently,Korean government enacted law about increasing tobacco price.The government decided to increase tobacco price as much as 2000 won averagely. However, it is controversial in Korean society, because the government didn't use tobacco tax for anti-smoking projects. The original national health promotion fund is 2-billion-won, but it is only 1.2% of that price that are used in real anti-smoking projects. Also, some people criticize this policy, because it is restricted to the common people, not for every people. That is, smokers who are rich do not mind increased price of cigarette. This is regarded as limits of this policy. Furthermore, just increasing price of tobacco cannot eliminate the fundamental motive of smoking.
At this point, To make citizen quit smoking, it is better to design tobacco package with warning labels of smoking than increasing its price. The warning labels in this argument mean not just prose, but images that give smokers feel provocative and alarming. Countries like Australia, Brazil and Belgium are using this policy and exactly more than 60 countries in the Americas, Eastern Mediterranean, Europe, South-East Asia and Western Pacific regions require pictures or images on cigarette packs. Smokers in countries where a warning said that a particular warning on package were much more likely to know about that hazard and smokers who reported noticing warnings were 1.5 to 3.0 times more likely to believe in each health hazard. In Korean society, designing cigarette package with warning labels of smoking will be more effective policy than increasing its price.
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